The one who really understand me inside of my family is my Mother. Loyalty, wisdom and responsibilities will always leading my achievement in every part of my life. According to me my Mom is the superwoman ever.
My Mom was born in Balaraja, West Java, on June 15, 1961. She is originally Sundanist. She has a short black hair, brown eyes, a pointed nose and nice lip. She is really beautiful with her tan skin, she is medium height and absolutely she is in a good shape. My Mom is a beautiful woman that always has a special place in my heart.
My Mom is an educated person, she is really aware about education. She will do everything for her children to make sure us to get well education. She graduated from senior highschool 1 Ceplak, Balaraja. Eventhough, she did not continue her study until the University but she always be the best lecturer in our family.
The great inspiration in my life when I need an idea to create something or to overcome my problems is my Mom. My Mom is a strongest person. Everyday she works for our family, such as cooking, washing and cleaning the house. She never said tired for doing all of that things and she never asking for help to us but I always tried to help her as well as I can. She never give up. Meanwhile, she has a charismatic that makes my self really comfortable whenever I am beside her.
The important person that I wish will always beside me and accompany me when I get stuck in my life is my Mom, with her lovely hands and overflowing love she takes over my self. She is a friendly Mom, She does not want to see her daughters and her sons to be suffer because of our troubles. She cares about us, she is a good listener, she listen about our problems first then she will give us an advice and afterthat she will try to find the solves to overcome that. I really like to share everything with her and I feel so relief when I have already told to her.
My Mom will always be the best idol in my eyes. I love her as I love my self. That is all about my Mom. The truly Idol that always be hero in every inch of my life . I love you Mom.
2 komentar:
Hi Ante,...
Your essay is good enough,..
But I can find a little bit mistake,.
Look at first paragraph, line 1..
"The one who really understand me inside of my family is my Mother".
I think it's good to you to change it with
"The one who really understands me inside of my family is my Mother".
That's it,.
so far so good,.
just keep writing,..
:)
mom is the best woman in the world!!!!
i like your writing!
nice to know about your mother!
becarefull with grammer & keep writing!
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